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Hilary Glasman-Deal
Imperial College London, UK
ICP
Imperial College Press
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Glasman-Deal, Hilary.
Science research writing for non-native speakers of English / by Hilary Glasman-Deal.
p. cm.
Includes bibliographical references.
ISBN  978-1-84816-309-6 (alk. paper) -- ISBN  978-1-84816-310-2 (pbk : alk. paper)
1. English language--Technical English--Handbooks, manuals, etc.  2. Technical writing--
Handbooks, manuals, etc.  3. English language--Textbooks for foreign speakers.  I. Title.
PE1475.G57  2009
808'.0665--dc22
2009043016
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Introduction: How to Use Th  is Book
Th  ings should be made as simple as possible, but not any simpler.
— Albert Einstein
 
Who is this book for?
Th  is book is designed to help non-native speakers of English write science 
research papers for publication in English. However, it can also be used as a 
guide for native English speakers who would like support with their science 
writing, and by science students who need to write a Master’s dissertation or 
PhD thesis. It is a practical, rather than a theoretical book, and is intended 
as a fast do-it-yourself manual for researchers and scientists.
Th  e  book  is  aimed  at  those  whose  English  language  ability  is  at 
intermediate  level  or  above.  If  you  have  taken  an  IELTS  test,  this  is 
equivalent to a score of above 6.0; if you have taken a TOEFL test then 
this is approximately equivalent to a score above 550 (paper-based test) or 
91 (iBT). However, if you have managed to read this far without using a 
dictionary, you will be able to use this book, even if you don’t understand 
every word.
Why do I need it?
Th  e goal of scientifi c research is publication, but good scientists are not 
always good writers and even native speakers of English sometimes have 
diffi  culty when they write up their research. Th  e aim of this book is to give 
you the information, vocabulary and skills you need quickly and easily so 
that you can write confi dently using the style and structure you see in the 
journals you read.
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vi  Science Research Writing
As a science researcher, you are able to read and understand complex, 
high-level  material  in  your  fi eld.  However,  you  may  fi nd  it  diffi  cult  to 
produce written English which is at the same level as your reading. You 
may feel that your English writing does not represent the content of your 
work eff ectively or accurately. Th  e aim of this book is to enable you to use 
your reading ability and the material you read to develop the writing skills 
your work requires.
Developing the skills to write up your own research is the only way to 
join the international science community. If you depend on English speakers 
to translate your writing, their translation may not represent exactly what 
you intended. If you depend on proofreaders to correct your English they 
may not notice some errors, because a sentence which is grammatically 
correct  is  still  ‘wrong’  if  it  does  not  mean  what  you  intended.  Also,  a 
proofreader  may  not  check  whether  your  writing  fi ts  the  conventional 
‘science research’ patterns. For example, you may have forgotten to justify 
your choice of method or explain how your results relate to your original 
question, and this could mean that an editor of a science journal rejects 
your paper as unprofessional.
Writing and publishing a research paper is the best way to get your 
career off  the ground. If you can turn your thesis or research project into 
a useful paper, your CV (Curriculum Vitae) will immediately look more 
professional  and  will  be  more  competitive  internationally.  You  may  feel 
that  you  don’t  have  the  time  to  improve  your  English,  but  you  already 
know most of what you need from the reading you have done over the 
years. In order to write up your research for publication you don’t need to 
learn much more English than you already know. Science writing is much 
easier than it looks.
Most science research is written according to a fairly conventional 
structure: fi rst the title, then the abstract, followed by an introduction, aft er 
which there is a central section which describes what was done and what 
was found and then a discussion and/or conclusion. At the end of the paper 
or  research  article,  acknowledgements  and  references  are  added.  Th  is 
means that the structure of a research article will be quite similar for all 
writers.
Because science writing is so conventional, the amount of grammar 
and vocabulary you need to learn is quite small. For example, the non-
technical vocabulary used in scientifi c writing consists of a limited set of 
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words such as attempt, conduct, interpret, evaluate, determine, implement, 
formulate, classify, correlate, enhance, which are used as a kind of ‘code’. 
All  the  vocabulary  you  need  to  get  started  (apart  from  the  specialised 
vocabulary of your fi eld) is in this book.
What will this book teach me?
Th  e  book  will  show  you  how  to  discover  the  conventions  of  structure, 
organisation, grammar and vocabulary in science writing in your fi eld and 
will provide you with the tools to write in a similar way and at a similar 
level. It will teach you how to turn your research into a paper that can be 
submitted to a professional journal. You will also be able to use most of the 
information in the book and all of the language and vocabulary if you are 
writing a thesis in English.
I have been teaching English for Academic Purposes to science students 
for over 30 years. For the past 15 years I have been teaching research writing 
in the English Language Support Programme at Imperial College, London, 
where I also work closely with individual research students and staff  who 
are writing a paper or thesis. Th  is book is based on the most useful thing 
I have learned: when your language skills are not perfect, organising your 
information in a conventional way and using conventional language are 
very important. If you write according to a conventional model, the reader 
knows what you are trying to do because the model you are following is 
familiar, and language errors are therefore less signifi cant. A researcher who 
begins by writing according to a simple and conventional model will soon 
develop higher level skills for writing independently and professionally. Th  e 
opposite is also true: researchers who do not begin by writing according to 
a conventional model are less likely to develop these skills.
How does the book work?
Th  e strategy in this book can be summed up as follows: carefully examine 
good examples of the kind of writing you would like to produce, identify 
and  master  the  structure,  grammar  and  vocabulary  you  see  in  these 
examples and then apply them in your own writing.
Th  e book is divided into fi ve units, each dealing with one section of a 
research article. Unit 1 deals with the Introduction, Unit 2 the Methodology, 
Unit 3 the Results, Unit 4 the Discussion or Conclusion and Unit 5 the 
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