Successful Scientific Writing
The detailed, practical, step-by-step advice in this user-friendly guide will help stu-
dents and researchers to communicate their work more effectively through the written
word. Covering all aspects of the writing process, this concise, accessible resource is crit-
ically acclaimed, well-structured, comprehensive, and entertaining. Self-help exercises
and abundant examples from actual typescripts draw on the authors’ extensive experience
working both as researchers and with them.
Whilst retaining the accessible and pragmatic style of earlier editions, this third edition
has been updated and broadened to incorporate such timely topics as guidelines for
successful international publication, ethical and legal issues including plagiarism and
falsified data, electronic publication, and text-based talks and poster presentations.
With advice applicable to many writing contexts in the majority of scientific disciplines,
this book is a powerful tool for improving individual skills and an eminently suitable text
for classroom courses or seminars.
Ja n i c e R. Mat t h e ws is a writer and educator with a broad background in the biological
sciences. She has edited books, technical manuals and hundreds of scientific research
papers in the veterinary and biological sciences, both in university settings and for private
industry.
Ro b e rt W. Mat t h e ws is a Josiah Meigs Distinguished Teaching Professor at the
University of Georgia and a member of the UGA Teaching Academy. An insect behaviour
specialist, his scientific publications number over 165 research articles.
Successful Scientific Writing
A step-by-step guide
for the biological
and medical sciences
Third edition
Janice R. Matthews and
Robert W. Matthews
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Contents
Preface
Preface to the third edition
p r epa r i ngtow r i te
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Search and research
Conducting a comprehensive literature review
Using the Internet wisely and well
Tapping other informal and formal communication
channels
Your research: the big picture
Choose a communication venue
Formal publication: the message determines the medium
Other ways to publish
Plan to succeed
Organize and plan your message
Avoid plagiarism
Use the Process Approach to take charge
Exercise 1.1. Search strategy and Boolean logic
Exercise 1.2. Message, format, and audience
Exercise 1.3. Organizing ideas
c o m p o s i ng af i r stdra ft
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Deal with matters of authorship
Productivity tools and pitfalls
Use word processing to write more efficiently
Master the tools that will make your writing life simpler
Spellcheckers, grammar and style analysis programs
Follow standard structure
Introduction
Materials and methods
Results
Discussion and conclusions
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Contents
Acknowledgments
References
Abstracts and summaries
The title
Other title page items
Use tense to show the status of work
Build momentum – and keep it!
Exercise 2.1. Spelling and grammar programs
Exercise 2.2. Title choices
Exercise 2.3. Tense use
v i suals u p p ortf ort hew r itt enwo rd
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Choosing and using visual aids
Tables
Figures
Graphs
Photographs and other documentary illustrations
Explanatory artwork
Examining your choices
Exercise 3.1. Table and figure choices
v i suals u p p ortf ort hes p o k enwo rd
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Oral presentations
Media choices for oral presentations
Developing a traditional text-based oral presentation
Visual elements of text, tables, and figures
The PowerPoint controversy
Speaking in public: the human factor
Control nervousness
Delivering the speech or presentation
Handling questions
Poster presentations: a happy hybrid
Preparing a poster
Presenting a poster
Exercise 4.1. Slide presentation format
Exercise 4.2. Answering questions
rev i s i ngtoi n c r e a sec o h e r e n ce
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Work efficiently
Start with organization and logic
Use the power at your command
Improve the big picture
Rework for clarity
Rewrite for readability
Condense for brevity
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Contents
When short might be too short
Abbreviations, acronyms, and other shortened
forms
Noun clusters and strings of pearls
Exercise 5.1. Person and point of view
Exercise 5.2. Readability
Exercise 5.3. Shortened forms
Exercise 5.4. Clarity and brevity
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Choose a better word
125–152
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Recognize and minimize jargon
Use bias-free, inclusive language
Choose the right word
Focus fuzzy nouns and qualifiers
Check the verbs
Choose livelier verbs
Unmask disguised verbs
Active and passive voice
Subject–verb agreement
Beware of strange links
Ambiguous antecedents and misplaced modifiers
Dangling participles
The mischief of multiples
Collective nouns and noun phrases
The grammar of comparisons and lists
Exercise 6.1. Jargon
Exercise 6.2. Handling language sensitively
Exercise 6.3. Devil pairs
Exercise 6.4. Which and that
Exercise 6.5. Fuzzy words and disguised verbs
Exercise 6.6. Active and passive voice
Exercise 6.7. Subject–verb agreement
Exercise 6.8. Dangling participles and other misplaced
modifiers
Exercise 6.9. Collective nouns, comparisons, and lists
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at t e n d i n g t o g ra m m a r , n u m b e r s , a n d o t h e r
m e c h a n i cs
Tweak the text
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Punctuate for clarity
Capitalize consistently
Treat scientific names properly
Use foreign words and phrases to inform, not impress