2002 年上海华东师范大学英语写作考研真题 1.Edit the following sentences to eliminate errors or weaknesses. Write"correct"after the sentence if it is correct. (30%) 1. The Asiatic elephant inhabits in the forests of Southeast Asia from India to Ceylon and Borneo, it does not like heat and seeks the deep shade of the forest. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 2. To complete the task properly, a report must be submited by the student. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 3. Under no circumstances its content will lead you into such stuffy and hackneyed topics as how things should be done to please delicate little old ladies tsk-tsking over their teacups. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 4.Balding men who wear their remained hair long, or try to arrange a few strands to serve for many, advertise not only their baldness but their vanity. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 5. We ironed out the sticky spots in our relationship. 

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 6. On the strength of my high scores in the National University Entrance Examination, I entered in 1986 into the Beijing-based University of International Business and Economy, one of the nation's leading higher education institutions of its kind. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 7.As I drive over the bridge connecting the island to the mainland, I remember the long drives my family took to our beach home and arriving with our heavy hand luggage. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 8. Personally speaking, I think it is important for me to study English composition because it can enable me to express myself clearly in a manner that will be comprehensible. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 9. Jones wrote the definitive treatise on juvenile delinquency and much of his time went into the project. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 

___________________________________________ 10. The U.S. House of Representatives has passed a resolution condemning bigotry and violence against Arab-Americans, Muslims and Americans of South Asian descent,apparently spurred by the recent terrorist attacks on Pentagon and World Trade Center. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 2.In an essay of about seven hundred words, write about your reflections upon the following mini-story:(70%) 小巷深处的出击 欧湘林 大街上有三个人在追逐。跑在前边的人身高腿长是个窃贼，后边追的两个人是警察。警察边 追边喊"抓贼"，可窃贼手里晃着刀没人敢拦。 窃贼进了一条小巷，小巷又深又窄。拐弯处突然伸出一条腿，叭!窃贼被绊倒，摔了个鼻青 眼肿，还没来得及挣扎着爬起来，就被追上来的两个警察抓住了"啊巴!"一个警察正要去搀 扶那位因绊贼而倒地的年轻人时，一位姑娘已经把年轻人扶了起来，是个哑巴。警察看到， 年轻人右腿膝盖处，裤管被鲜血染红。他捋起年轻人的裤脚管一看，啊!惊呆了! 简直不敢相信自己的眼睛，原来是条假肢! "嘿嘿……"年轻人忍着疼痛笑笑说∶"只能使使绊子…….."望着年轻人刚毅的脸，警察一把 捂住被假肢金属附件割破了皮肉的伤口动情地说∶ "谢谢你，勇敢的年轻人...." 年轻人害羞地说，没什么。原来今天是他和恋人约会 （完） _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________